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What happened? I awake this morning to find,
that I am on the floor near a door of a different kind.
I cannot seem to recall what has happened, my love,
have I ... I have done something wrong?

You are quiet around me, your eyes give uneasy glances,
please, take my hand and heart as noble advances.
They are to comfort and ease your troubled pain,
I swear it to you, whatever I did, I won't do it again.

I can leave, if you want, never ever to again be seen,
for I can become to you nothing but a former dream.
Is this what you want because I will gladly go,
thus, this is goodbye, Lucius? It would seem so.

I head to the door and there, I find it is locked,
why on Earth would it be this way? I feel mocked.
Looking back to you, I see something I never have seen before:
Lucius, why do you glare at me? UNLOCK the door!

Are you ill? Talk to me, say something immediately, please do!
Lucius, my love, my all, what is this darkness I can see in you?
No! Step back! You are frightening me, I cannot breath!
Darkness now shrouds, beckons and welcomes me into a horrific dream.
Title snagged and slightly modified from Tim Burton's Corpse Bride.

Well, folks, if you saw [link] , you now know his little secret. I knew I could never quite give it away. :blush: I'm glad know you all will understand perhaps a little more, but! There's still more to be had than what you see. :evillaugh:

If in case you ARE wondering why she seems a bit out of it and can't understand what's going on, she has dissociative amnesia. [link] Click that link and it's in there. It'll make more sense.

Consider this poem a follow-up of Come fair lady. Gift, per se, Ivy. ^__^ Hope you like it. I know you will.


Lucius Ravenwood :: ~deathtoll1912
Lucinda Lancaster :: ~gabietink

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MouseAvenger Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008  Hobbyist Filmographer
Lovely! :)
undead-medic Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008   General Artist
Very good :thumbsup:

I'm still devising where their twisted little relationship should go.
gabietink Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
yeah. Bonnie and Clyde, anyone? :XD:
MoonWolfGirl Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Lovely :D
gabietink Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
yet sickeningly entrancing
Fairy-Red-Hime Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008
Very interesting poem! :clap:
gabietink Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2008

Luc: ^^
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